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Add two structural patterns from the StoryScope study - #284

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StoryScope scored 61,608 stories on how they were built rather than how they were worded, and structure alone separated model writing from human writing about nine times in ten. Two of its findings had no pattern here.

  • §3 covers a summary sentence that restates what an example already showed. It sits in section A because the cut is justified on one sighting: the sentence adds nothing the example did not carry.
  • §19 covers stock body sensations standing in for emotion. Marked weak alone, since one pounding heart is ordinary writing.

Step 2 now keeps the real titles, brands, places, and dates the source gives, because writers name these about twice as often as models do. It still forbids supplying a name the source lacks.

Old numbers 3-17 shift up by one and 18-25 shift up by two. The writing-sample reference pointed at forced triads instead of the dash rule, so it now points at §9.

Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01HSoyQS3Hyzq9qjou5wtsKn

StoryScope scored 61,608 stories on how they were built rather than how
they were worded, and structure alone separated model writing from human
writing about nine times in ten. Two of its findings had no pattern here.

- §3 covers a summary sentence that restates what an example already
  showed. It sits in section A because the cut is justified on one
  sighting: the sentence adds nothing the example did not carry.
- §19 covers stock body sensations standing in for emotion. Marked weak
  alone, since one pounding heart is ordinary writing.

Step 2 now keeps the real titles, brands, places, and dates the source
gives, because writers name these about twice as often as models do. It
still forbids supplying a name the source lacks.

Old numbers 3-17 shift up by one and 18-25 shift up by two. The
writing-sample reference pointed at forced triads instead of the dash
rule, so it now points at §9.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01HSoyQS3Hyzq9qjou5wtsKn
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